Kia Ora
ko Tararua te maunga
ko Ohau te awa
ko Tukorehe te iwi
no Ohau ahau
ko Patrick toku papa
ko Tracy toku mama
ko Howard toku ingoa
Tena koutou tena koutou tena kotou katoa.
i
saw
cactus
with oozing
venom
We had to write something to help us remember what we need for good writing.
The "I" is for ideas the "S" is for sentence fluency the "C" is for conventions the "W" is for word choice the "O" is for organization and the "V" is for voice.
EXCELLENCE.....
I picked this picture of Richie Mc Caw because he is a very good rugby
player and he shows excellence by persavering and practacing for everyone of
his rugby games.
MY YEAR SO FAR..
I think my year so far has been going pretty good I've learnt
lots about different ways to write, like different words choices,
different types of sentences, sentence structure, varied sentence beginnings,
paragraphing, and lots more. I've learnt lots about the new computer programs
and they're really cool.
Kia Ora
ko Tararua te maunga
ko Ohau te awa
ko Tukorehe te iwi
no Ohau ahau
ko Patrick toku papa
ko Tracy toku mama
ko Howard toku ingoa
Tena koutou tena koutou tena kotou katoa.
i
saw
cactus
with
oozing
venom
We had to write something to help us remember what we need for good writing.
The "I" is for ideas the "S" is for sentence fluency the "C" is for conventions the "W" is for word choice the "O" is for organization and the "V" is for voice.
EXCELLENCE.....
I picked this picture of Richie Mc Caw because he is a very good rugby
player and he shows excellence by persavering and practacing for everyone of
his rugby games.
MY YEAR SO FAR..
I think my year so far has been going pretty good I've learnt
lots about different ways to write, like different words choices,
different types of sentences, sentence structure, varied sentence beginnings,
paragraphing, and lots more. I've learnt lots about the new computer programs
and they're really cool.